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Incoherent Praise Over..................

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 05:13 pm
Bees and humming amidst clover,
Fortune, panz, and gusts of Gus,
Drom and bits of lusty lust,
Heartbeats in three quarter time,
Free verse and the runes of rhyme.
Babbling brooks and waterfalls,
Babies being born with cauls,

Nothing that we say or do is really cryptic,
Nor are you.

Inspired by drom's divergent thinking,
Chains of brass in silver linking.
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 05:26 pm
I love this, Letty. It's so irrepressible; I have read it about five times with glee. It got me thinking above all: 'isn't it grand to have a sort of family of friends on this board?'

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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 05:43 pm
and so it is, drom. Wonder whatever happened to London whose first and final post was: "Any Brits on Board"?
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 05:58 pm
I never heard of him, Letty. How many posts did he make?

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Letty
 
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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 06:42 pm
Two! Smile
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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 06:45 pm
A Laughing; I wonder why he wanted we Brits?

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Reply Sat 7 Aug, 2004 06:57 pm
Neat, guy, drom. Just feeling safe in the arms of England.

Still................I have to laugh at Johnny Horton's song:

In 1814, we took a little trip,
Along with colonel Jackson down the mighty Mississip,
We took a little bacon, and we took a little beans,
And we fought the bloody British in the town of New Orleans.

Well, we fired our guns and the British kept acomin'
Wasn't neigh as many as there was awhile ago.
Fired once more and they begin arunnin'
Down the Mississippi to the gulf of Mexico.

Know something? We love the sounds of the past.
We love the sense of being.
But we never forget to look
At what we all are seeing.

And what we see is "any human to another"....
I've never been anywhere, drom.
And in that I share our sorrows, our thoughts, and our
Greatest expectations.
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