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Fri 6 Aug, 2004 03:06 am
Edit: Moderator: Moved from Poetry to Original Writing, which is for any form of your original writing. The Poetry forum is for poems by other writers.
Thy azure ere gloaming
Hath blest the deep
Thy beauteous ichor
Thou shall e'er bleed!
Andrew, Welcome to A2K.
The beauty of your quatrain lies not only in the picture that it paints, but also in its compression. I really like it.