Quote:1) Is it okay to use words like a hag , a crone and beldam instead of the term old woman?. You know ,I wanna be more sophisticated !
You sure can. Although there are usually many synonyms for words, different ones will imply slightly different connotations or meanings which can allow you to describe things better.
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2) I feel like the word block doesn't fit with hair.What the proper collocation here , a lump ?!!
A block usually refers to a cube or cube-like shape, for example a block of ice. It is often a subdivision of a larger thing. A lump is also a subdivision but it has a different shape...for example, a lump of clay. If you are talkin about hair, you would usually say lock.
But in your sentence, you should not use lock because you are not talking about a section of hair...you are talking about the fact that his hair takes over his head in a wild fashion. It would be better to refer to it as a "mass of hair" or "swarm of hair".
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3) I can use more than one word describing the man : like a gruff or he like skirmish or hassle or fight.And did it make any difference if I said rough instead of tough.I feel inside that there is but I don't know.
you can use as many adjectives as you like, although if you use too many it will sound awkward. skirmish is not a description for a man, though, a skirmish is a small battle. there is a difference between rough and tough. tough means that they are strong and can endure a lot of pain. rough can mean different things...but it usually means some or all of the following: doesn't shave regularly, dirty, vulgar, gutteral voice, dirty hair, dirty clothes. you would expect someone who is rough to be tough also.
Quote:4) The verb tense here bothers me .I think it sould be present and past because when I read the sentence again it doesn't seem that it is right with one tense and I have to change it.DO you have this feeling sometimes or I am nuts?!
Hehe, I'm sorry but I must inform you that your exerpt does have a lot of tense errors...and other kinds of errors. I would correct it, but I cannot understand what you are trying to say in many places.