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You Excite Me

 
 
Reply Sun 1 Aug, 2004 06:51 pm
I like the way you are,
when the littlest things excite you.
So happy, so relaxed.
Your face lights up, and you giggle aloud.
Your smile can heal my pain.
It's when you forget that you might be judged.
You let go of your inhibitions and just be you.
The you that I love.
Suddenly the moment passes,
and you become suppressed again.
You fear me, you fear rejection.
Be not afraid for I am yours forever.
Stay open, stay free, be yourself.
I love the way you are,
You excite me.
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Reply Sun 1 Aug, 2004 07:11 pm
This writing, itself, is exciting, standupforpessimism.

If I received THIS as a note of poetry from someone- it would sure excite me. Great wording- heartfelt.
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Reply Mon 2 Aug, 2004 11:53 am
Awww, thanks tol! I'd be interested in reading some of your poetry sometime, anytime!
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