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Sun 1 Aug, 2004 07:01 am
The guitar bends in agony,
pulling strings as metaphor,
the harmonica speaks volumes
in a single wail.
The singer robs the sympathy of angels
with a plaintive expression
of love lost, love gone bad,
love left wanting, wasting.
A murder of crows trip
off the dreams of the slide guitar,
the player a harbinger
of both death and hope.
He commands us to smile and cry,
smile and cry,
hypnotized, composed,
in full view
of life's strange oaky knots.
Cav???
This is the caviar of writing!
Does the boy HAVE no gaps??
Omg Cav, I absolutley love this poem. It reeked of awesome. Hopefully one day I'll be able to write like that. Lol, now I am an adoring fan of your writing.
UhOh, Cav. You got a murder of groupies here.
You made me feel that guitar: sense that glissade and all that the blues boys can rip right out of the soul. Fantastic personification!