Reply Sun 1 Aug, 2004 07:01 am
The guitar bends in agony,
pulling strings as metaphor,
the harmonica speaks volumes
in a single wail.
The singer robs the sympathy of angels
with a plaintive expression
of love lost, love gone bad,
love left wanting, wasting.
A murder of crows trip
off the dreams of the slide guitar,
the player a harbinger
of both death and hope.

He commands us to smile and cry,
smile and cry,
hypnotized, composed,
in full view
of life's strange oaky knots.
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theollady
 
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Reply Sun 1 Aug, 2004 07:09 am
Cav???
This is the caviar of writing!
Does the boy HAVE no gaps??
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sun 1 Aug, 2004 07:15 am
Smile Thanks!
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Sun 1 Aug, 2004 01:30 pm
Omg Cav, I absolutley love this poem. It reeked of awesome. Hopefully one day I'll be able to write like that. Lol, now I am an adoring fan of your writing.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 1 Aug, 2004 02:38 pm
UhOh, Cav. You got a murder of groupies here.

You made me feel that guitar: sense that glissade and all that the blues boys can rip right out of the soul. Fantastic personification!
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