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Corners Aren't Only For Punishment.

 
 
Reply Thu 29 Jul, 2004 05:09 pm
I don't think this is a very good poem. I wrote it today when I was feeling really alone like I had no one in the world to talk to. But let me know what you all think of it. Maybe it's worth something.

Corners Aren't Only For Punishment~Gabby A.A.

Days start
I try to make way
try to make you happy
I try to make you smile
but you push me away.
Try to talk to about my problems
but you're to busy
everyone
is to busy for me.
All they see is a pretty face
a pretty face with no feelings.
But I do have feelings
which is why I'm writing this in the first place.
Maybe if I write it
you will understand.
I don't think I've ever felt this lonley
people talk to me
but it's never about me.
He says he misses the time we spent together.
So do I,
I miss it all the time.
Don't know if I'll ever find a guy as perfect,
or love a man as much as I loved him.
But I don't want to have to miss him again...
Everyone seems to tell me, latley
how wonderful she is,
how beautiful, how perfect,
how good she can sing and how well she can dance.
I wish they would say that about me
and not just my best friend.
I've got talent
and they don't seem to understand.
I lose a friend
I gain an enemy
it's things like these
that completley sicken me.
I don't want to be alone
but no one seems to want me.
I guess this is how life's supposed to be
when you're 14.
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Reply Sat 31 Jul, 2004 11:30 am
Hey DC, The poem shows alot of emotion, and I especially like these three lines:
"Don't know if I'll ever find a guy as perfect,
or love a man as much as I loved him.
But I don't want to have to miss him again... "

We all feel alone at times, and 14 is a tough age but you'll get through it. Keep your head up!
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Reply Sun 1 Aug, 2004 01:27 pm
Thanks Smile
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