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thought of this on the john today

 
 
stuh505
 
Reply Tue 27 Jul, 2004 06:11 pm
for a few days i was broken
but am only stunned
indeed, I'm not so easily undone
all I need is the sun
to keep on shining

edit - might as well put in the other spontaneous poem of the day, i just wrote it on letty's thread it might not get seen there...

sinking sun this time will set
a summer's dream which way will go
we met another time to pass a second
too early for the day
words of parting come too late
slippery shoes and thoughts decline
a picture that wasnt caught in time
the nets fall short and catch nothing
claws scrabbling for a final word
never heard
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the reincarnation of suzy
 
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Reply Wed 28 Jul, 2004 07:50 am
very nice! I especially like the first one.
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