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Juliet was manipulative

 
 
Reply Sat 24 Jul, 2004 08:45 pm
Romeo, Romeo, where the hell are you?
The man for my marriage,
by me is found lacking.
Hours pacing on this balcony,
its you I've been tracking.
I remember your eyes,
all shine, and velvety lips
(though you tasted like brandy and
asparagus tips)
We met but for a moment,
quickly pulled apart by my nurse.
I was dragged to the stairs,
you and friends did disperse.
A careful word to a guard,
and soon you'll be here...
Over my back wall,
Thinking it was all your idea.
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the reincarnation of suzy
 
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Reply Sat 24 Jul, 2004 10:17 pm
Smile That's great!
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 24 Jul, 2004 10:33 pm
Heh heh, good one. I'm fascinated by Romeo and Juliet, because I think both of them were dumbasses. I'm going to post a recent poem on the Romeo and Juliet theme, inspired by an episode of Law and Order. Yeah, inspiration can come from anywhere.
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the reincarnation of suzy
 
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Reply Sun 25 Jul, 2004 09:58 am
Cav you're a sicko! Wink
They were just kids, so yeah they were dumbasses!
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Sun 25 Jul, 2004 11:20 am
(I liked it, Polar)

Yes, Romeo and Juliet were foolish. In fact, they probably are the least mature couple in the whole of the Tragedies.

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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Mon 26 Jul, 2004 05:39 pm
I liked that alot...very good work.
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