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Fri 23 Jul, 2004 09:14 pm
I don't think i'm a waste of time
I think I could be the time of your life.
There's no need to be cryptic
I can see right though you.
There's obviously something here
It's been here for years.
Lets stop wondering
Just dive in, I am here for you.
Take my hand, i'll hold you tight
Free my soul, i'll love you forever.
I've poured out my heart
Don't be afraid to pour out yours.
It's all up to you now.
Take me.
i like this people shouldnt be afraid to try out someone how do you know how its goina end up till you try
Exactly, tell this to the man I want.
Maybe rename the poem "Get off yer ass and f*** me already, you passive-agressive pussy" and put it on his pillow, with a mint. I really enjoyed it.
lol.good out look, i just read it again....too funny.
Pessimism..I LOVE THIS POEM! It never ceases to amaze me how one of your poems relates to something going on in my life at the moment...awesome work, keep it up.