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Deepest Places

 
 
Reply Tue 20 Jul, 2004 11:13 pm
This is rather different than the sad depressing crap I normally post. Hope you all like the change. Razz

Deepest Places-Gabby A.A.

There's a place so deep inside myself,
I never knew it was there.
I didn't know how to be happy,
until I discovered you.

Miles and miles of fields of violets.
A cave of diamond ice.
A lake sparkling of champegne.
We'll lay in a bed of rose petals
and just be happy looking into each others eyes.

The deep spot in me
was where you were supposed to be.
And now that you're there,
I don't feel so empty anymore.

Galaxies upon glaxies of shining stars frozen in time.
A forest of evergreens,
evergoing like our love.
We'll laugh in the diverting darkness
holding onto each other like we're never going to let go.

The place you take me to,
I can't explain.
Every minute that we spend together,
I never want it to end.
You replaced my sadness with happiness.
You are my delight.
I love you.
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Reply Wed 21 Jul, 2004 04:06 pm
I like it. I remember I had a time like that once! Good poem!
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