Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 01:04 pm
I miss you, I miss you every damn day.
Sometimes I can block you,
but those feeling won't go away.
I'm dreaming of you, of you holding me tight.
I'm with someone else,
but you are who I want at night.

Every time I see you, it messes up my head.
Without you,
I might aswell be dead.
I torture myself, every damn day.
With visions of us,
that can't go away.

I love you dammit, why couldn't you stay?
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NickFun
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 01:23 pm
A poignant poem. Maybe she's like my ex-wife. She finally found the right woman!
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Mon 12 Jul, 2004 05:08 pm
I really liked this poem. Its kind of ironic you posted it on the day I got broken up with....Its very relatable and I like it alot.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 11 Oct, 2004 08:11 pm
I just went back through my poems, and thought I would bring a couple back out to the new eyes here at a2k.
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kellyvinal
 
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Reply Mon 11 Oct, 2004 11:48 pm
Very direct, pessimist. LOL to Nick!
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 17 Oct, 2004 04:50 pm
Thanks!! Nick isn't around anymore, is he?
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2004 07:05 am
Nick still posts occasionally. Nice, honest piece.
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NickFun
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2004 09:08 pm
Hey Cav! I'm still here occasionanally but I do most of my posting at Seattlbuzz.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 18 Oct, 2004 09:09 pm
Haaawww....you trader!!!
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