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The Untrodden ways of thinking......

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sat 10 Jul, 2004 07:11 pm
Are not to the sages of old,
From metaphor of quietly thinking
To youth's gentle touches of bold.

For all those who seek and surrender,
We only know this,
Gentle friends,

We're just a piece in a puzzle
In verses that never shall end.

Philosophy? Yes, it does comfort
Until we look ending in face,
And then we are all of one color,
And all in the canter of pace.

Dedicated to those who did seek on my thread of poetry and philosophy..........
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 01:47 am
That's beautiful, Letty, despite the harshness of reality (or maybe in face of our own poignancy.) Did you think about writing this before the poetry and philosophy thread?


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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 07:23 am
Good morning, drom. No, This was a creation after the philosophy thread. I'm glad you liked it, my friend. I enjoyed your aside, too.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 08:36 am
I think that's a wonderful piece, Letty. One of your better efforts, even.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 08:42 am
Well, edgar. Coming from you I am quite touched. You feeling better today?
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 07:44 pm
I feel well enough to go to the job tomorrow. They like me to be as energetic as a lad of eighteen, but will have to settle for about forty or fifty for a week or so.
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Tarah
 
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Reply Tue 13 Jul, 2004 03:16 pm
Letty, how beautifully you expressed the thought that at the end, we're all as one.
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colorbook
 
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Reply Tue 13 Jul, 2004 03:59 pm
Re: The Untrodden ways of thinking......
Letty wrote:

Dedicated to those who did seek on my thread of poetry and philosophy..........



Your way with words made me smile Smile
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