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Princess

 
 
Reply Thu 8 Jul, 2004 09:50 pm
Princess, tell me why
I can't be the one for you.
Princess, show me how
I can make life perfect for you.

Princess, you are magic,
I Love everything about you.
Princess, you are the one,
and I want to make it up to you.

Princess, I may be no Prince,
nor deserving of you;
but that doesn't change the facts:
I'm madly in Love with You.

Princess, it might not work,
but could I have lived with those regrets?
Princess, I want to help you
live the Fairy-tale of you dreams.

Princess, I hope you meet
the perfect prince for you.
Princess, I wish it could be me,
but I know I'd never do.

Princess, count the stars,
and tell me what they say;
Princess, I trust you completely,
but I don't want to go on my way.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 01:47 pm
Great! I loved it! Love sure can hurt, and if it can, it will.
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benevolenthell
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 08:17 pm
Thanks.
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Mon 12 Jul, 2004 05:06 pm
That was a great poem, I really liked it. And love does hurt, as I so painfully found out yesterday. I loved your poem tho.
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bestxbroken
 
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Reply Wed 14 Jul, 2004 10:39 pm
humm hearts break alot its not a nice world but im kinda turned off by the use of princess it makes me think of this great person and then again it makes me think of all these stuck up kids having that word on there butt ugg scares me
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