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Insomnia

 
 
Reply Thu 8 Jul, 2004 09:47 pm
Outside a sprinkler spins 'round. Psh-Psh-Psh; che-che-che; Psh-Psh-Psh-Psh. A horn goes off to the cool air blowing through my window. But I'm still awake. It's One O'clock in the morning, I am tired as hell and have nothing left to do. The wind rustles the leaved trees, reminding me of the abscence of the call to sleep. My eyes heavy, my body weak, yet no desire do I have to sleep. Instead of black, the sky is a navy blue, the trees mere silhouettes of flashing elephants and haunted screams running across the backdrop of city light.

Although they seemlessly blend with night's deceptive blue, I know the mountains are out there. In several hours the sun will rise and so will the peaks, 'lest their presence is given away prematurely by the setting of the moon.

An empty street, lit by emptier streetlight. The wind still blows, murkying the impure, pale, streetlight. This is meaningless and I should sleep.
But sleep comes not and trying to only pushes it further from me.

If only there were a reason, if only this insomnia logical. But look, I sit here, alone, mind wandering from the depth of the early morning sky to the smell of quickly dispersing candle smoke, and now, the hum of a computer's fan - which has abruptly died.

I sit here just marveling at the way the lamp light is casted across my hand onto the page. Marveling at my half-reflection in the glass atop a comic that long ago lost all humour.
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stuh505
 
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Reply Fri 9 Jul, 2004 12:01 pm
lol, you stay up to 1 AM and you call that insomnia?
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DC DarkAngel89
 
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Reply Sat 10 Jul, 2004 05:23 pm
I enjoyed this poem. The fact that it covered one subject so well was very good. I like the way you ended it wondering what happens. It caught my attention from beggining till end.
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benevolenthell
 
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Reply Sun 11 Jul, 2004 08:19 pm
Hmm . . . yeah, that is an early night, isn't it? Well, that wasn't the end of the night, I could just tell that there was going to be little sleep involved.
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