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I was in love with the unloveable

 
 
Reply Tue 6 Jul, 2004 10:00 pm
I was in love with the unloveable

She in love with another guy
The guy of her dreams
Her very first kind
I had to go to school and always see the sight
I had to see the **** every night

I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable

Sometimes I wish I was the one in front of you kissing you goodbye
I remember the good times
Yes,where we used to kiss,laugh and smile all the time
Where you would count on me for a shoulder to lean on
When you was feeling so out of life

That's why it was to much for me to bear
Seeing you in front of me with those pretty eyes
Seeing everything that I loved but couldn't touch
couldn't love you the way I wanted
I had to stand back and say good-bye
Yes,baby it's true

I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable

Girl you was always on my mind
First thought when I wake up it was you
Last thought when I want to go to sleep it was you
The dreams I had was always about you

Just wishing things weren't true
The vip was new
Something I had to get used to
Yes,baby it true

I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable

And,baby I'm sorry
I don't know how it happen
And I wish it wasn't so
Things had to go the way they did
I'm sorry we couldn't have no more fun times together

It not that i didn't wanted it
It just that couldn't be myself
The way I was feeling
The feelings I had for you
Yes,baby it's true

I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable
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dog4life
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jul, 2004 02:22 am
IF you want you can send opionions to my e-mail address [email protected]
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dog4life
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jul, 2004 02:25 am
This is the second version.I was mad bore and just kept on making new lines I think the first song is better what is your opinion?Which one is better?

I was in love with the unloveable part 1


She in love with another guy
The guy of her dreams
Her very first kind

Nothing could break them apart
This **** was broking my heart

I was always thinking of a way to start
A way to get back in her life
But it wasn't happening
To much love was in the air
No matter how much I tried
I counldn't get in there

I had to stop
because not only did i lose a girl
I also lost a friend
That when I broke apart
wrote this song
So i could tell you every part

I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable

I always had to see the sight
It made me cry tears in the night

Just wondering what happen
How did we go so fast
You told me so many things
I thought we was gotten last

I didn't want believe this was the end
Now I have to sit here
Act like it nothing
When I was feeling the very first cut of my life
Girl I'm ain't fronting
I thought what we shared was true
Yes,baby it's true

I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable
I was in love with the unloveable
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Wed 7 Jul, 2004 10:51 am
The second version is better in my opinion, you might want to go back and check spelling and phrasing some though. Welcome to a2k!
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