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death unscripted

 
 
Reply Tue 6 Jul, 2004 08:32 pm
Young and restless
No self esteem
No respect or judgment
Sick of this jealousy
Out way past curfew
I'm so arrogant
I just puked on you
I'm losing all my friends

Cross the street before you look
Too young for my own good
Don't care about my own grades
Let's stay up way to late

Stealing signs and graffiti
The cops are coming for me
Run as fast as you can
That cop looks like peter pan
he eats a lot of doughnuts
Oh look now he's blowing chucks

I can't die yah I won't die today
Imagination where'd you go
I'm too young I can't die today
Irrational is what I am
I can't die yah I won't die today
Invincible Is what I'm not
I'm too young I can't die today
Rules of the house Is what I'm taught

I hate every thing
Pissed of at the world
I cant wait to drive
Ill be out every night

Such a poor attitude
In a world of self hate
Cant learn from my mistakes
I lack responsibility
This world revolves around me
Why cant you be like your older brother
He didn't stay out late
He didn't do the things you do
He didn't say the things you say
Why cant you not be you
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Reply Wed 7 Jul, 2004 07:15 am
Powerful poem of teen angst! It brings back my own teenage years when my mother liked to compare me to my oldest brother (she didn't compare me to my other brother because he was worse than me). Hang in there Bestx! And hang onto this poem. It has great value!
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Reply Tue 13 Jul, 2004 08:54 pm
thanks i try to step back and write what i see and i saw teenages(including myself) rebelling...what my parents dont get is that it is a normal thing and by them holding me back is making me rebel more and harder and longer but it has come comical stuff like the fat cop
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