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Lovers Spat Song, not as in spit. :)

 
 
Brand X
 
Reply Thu 17 Jun, 2004 05:52 am
Messy and undone
That's how I left things
A fading bond
Reflected in golden rings

If memory serves
That's how I left things
When I'm alone
Reflecting with guitar strings

My turn to think
That's how I left things
I feel remorse
Detected now as I sing

(chorus)
And I tell myself
That I'm doing the right thing
For me

All the while
It's taking an army
To convince me

Would someone
Help me please

Blindsided you
That's how I left things
I'm growing numb
Deflecting self-loathing stings

Your turn to speak
That's how I left things
Avoiding you
Rejected as the phone rings

I'm sorry too
That's how I left things
If peace would come
Direction to my feelings

(chorus)
I can't help myself
If I'm doing the wrong thing
For me

All the while
You can see right through me
I cannot flee

Could you forgive
Me please
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the reincarnation of suzy
 
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Reply Thu 17 Jun, 2004 06:37 am
Quite good.
I can almost hear it being sung by the old "Life of Agony!" Long, drawn out mournful words...
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Brand X
 
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Reply Thu 17 Jun, 2004 02:28 pm
Thanks!

As usual I write words and music simultaniously so the mood fits.

I's an easy listening song but not too agonizing.
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