1
   

No simple task.................

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Fri 11 Jun, 2004 06:02 pm
the art of finding where we are,
No star to guide,
No sage who intercedes
To scatter winds of softness.
No loft to hide among the hay.

I cannot stay, the ancients say.
So go away!
And I reply with silence
  • Topic Stats
  • Top Replies
  • Link to this Topic
Type: Discussion • Score: 1 • Views: 452 • Replies: 2
No top replies

 
drom et reve
 
  1  
Reply Fri 11 Jun, 2004 06:18 pm
That was wonderful, Letty; a slice of profundity. Perhaps things are better without the sages and stars, though; freer, even if more difficult.


0 Replies
 
Letty
 
  1  
Reply Fri 11 Jun, 2004 06:36 pm
drom, as the Jazz boys say, "You've been reading my mail"
0 Replies
 
 

Related Topics

What inspired you to write...discuss - Discussion by lostnsearching
It floated there..... - Discussion by Letty
Small Voices - Discussion by Endymion
Rockets Red Glare - Discussion by edgarblythe
Short Story: Wilkerson's Tank - Discussion by edgarblythe
The Virtual Storytellers Campfire - Discussion by cavfancier
1st Annual Able2Know Halloween Story Contest - Discussion by realjohnboy
Literary Agents (a resource for writers) - Discussion by Craven de Kere
 
  1. Forums
  2. » No simple task.................
Copyright © 2024 MadLab, LLC :: Terms of Service :: Privacy Policy :: Page generated in 0.05 seconds on 09/29/2024 at 05:27:29