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fall away from me

 
 
Reply Fri 11 Jun, 2004 12:29 pm
If I pretend notto care, will it all go away?
If I hide behind myself, do you think I will stay?
Can I lie to myself to forget about you?
Can I handle myself, what should I do?

Fall away from me
Fall away from you
Fall away from this world
That reminds me of you

Do you cry at night, when you think of me?
Do you believe this is the way it should be?
Say you love me, and i'll march straight home.
Say i'm sorry but I have to be alone.

Fall away from me
Fall away from you
Fall away this world
That reminds me of you

Countless days I longed for your existence.
Countless times I felt your resistance.
What was I thinking when I thought of you?
What did I do to myself, what did I do to you?
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Reply Sat 12 Jun, 2004 03:24 am
I think we've all been there, and you captured those feelings well. Good poem.
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