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Memories....

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tellmemore
 
Reply Thu 10 Jun, 2004 09:19 am
The wind was strong last night
With the scarlet sky screaming your name
Etched in was drops of light
Wrapped in buning mist.

Down came the lashes
Beating the rough skin
Tore away the last pieces
Of left over memories.
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cavfancier
 
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Reply Sat 12 Jun, 2004 03:51 am
Nice poem. It captures a lot of emotion in just a few words.
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