A song I wrote about me my man...lol

Let me git my banjo and we can really get this tune a'rockin'!

Why, how positively sappy
very nice, stand up!
I'm just jealous, I'm sure!
The last thing I wrote for somebody was a poem to our friends asking them not to swear in front of our kids, which I framed and hung on the wall, like, 20 years ago.
They all thought it was fVckin pissa.
here's how it went:
When you visit our home there's one thing you must do,
please, try to refrain from swearing.
The reason for this is clear and it's true;
Our children have excellent hearing!
They'll be sure to repeat any bad words words you say,
Repeatedly, and to any who'll listen.
Then they'll be sent to their rooms for the day,
and the tears in their eyes, they will glisten.
So have a heart friends, and take our advice;
Watch your language, it will be repeated.
If you can do this, it would be very nice,
and our message here won't be defeated.

Corny and ineffective!

Ignore kicky...yer makin' me feel all mushy...

Was that me? :wink: I thought the poem was really sweet, and well-written, and I agree, keep up the writing.

hahaha! It was probably me and my obnoxious screed, cav! But I think stand up can take it!

I would concur.

Muahaha...wouldn't you like to know which part of your post I concur with, heh heh....

Why aren't there any emoticons sticking their tongues out, fer crying out loud!

Hmm...how about this?

Hi stand up , your poem is very nice ... please keep on writting .... you have the talent and as we all know the talent is like a baby needs to take care of ...... so please do that ......
GOOD LUCK .....

Thanks for all the comments!!!(and yours too kicky!!)

:-P

Hi Rose, Where are you from in Canada?

I bet she's from Alberta.

I bet she's from Ontario.

Oh - Good poem, stand up.

Ha-Ha, Thanks edgar!