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Evil Mind

 
 
Reply Thu 27 May, 2004 05:59 pm
I see you from afar
Looking sleezy
in your shiny green car
Hatred is what I feel
Pain is what you deserve
Revenge is the final deal

What goes around comes around
and a drop will do you
All the things you've done to me
will come back twice to you

You are going down
Down, down
I'm gonna take you down
Down, down
And you gonna feel it
Down, down, down
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stuh505
 
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Reply Fri 28 May, 2004 12:18 am
but why do you feel angry at him/her? what has he/she done to you? as a reader, I cannot associate with this poem without it painting a more detailed picture.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Fri 28 May, 2004 08:32 pm
I didn't say what the revenge was derived from, but it comes from a mind that was abused and manipulated for too long.
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bestxbroken
 
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Reply Fri 16 Jul, 2004 10:24 am
i like it everybody gets what they deserve in the end
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