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Tue 18 May, 2004 01:07 am
Seagulls fly above, soaring on the cold northern wind, carried upward and below, deep in contemplation, ocean waves torrently crash in, nothing left to salvage, no place of comfort, decaying remnants of a ravaged mind, lay scattered across the barren shoreline, moments escape reflection, dark against the sun, as a sorrowful cry of hunger, echoes back through time.
This is pretty good, a different format would be nice though, in my opinion.