Reply Sun 16 May, 2004 11:05 pm
just sitting here
wishing life would be granted to me
seems like every part of me
is dead
numb to the bone
the only thing that is still fully living
is my rage
my anger at so many people
how can they be alive
how can they be so happy
while im still here
yet those lost souls
the night walkers
they embrace me
i am not one of them
i do not belong
i never will
but i have joined their clan
and theyr way of living
i have become someone
and ill never change back
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 31 May, 2004 04:03 pm
I like it, I have also felt like this. Good poem!!
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Santanaof89
 
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Reply Mon 31 May, 2004 05:55 pm
yea, thankx, these are all copyrighted ya know? and i used to feel like this everyday.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 31 May, 2004 06:03 pm
No need to stress the "these are all copyrighted" thing. I said I liked the poem, not that I wanted to own it, and besides, if you havn't noticed I post my own poetry on here!
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Santanaof89
 
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Reply Mon 31 May, 2004 06:04 pm
ur right, i havent noticed, iv been busy. and i dont want anyone to steal my stuff, good or not
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