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New Song called"Your Loss"

 
 
Reply Sun 9 May, 2004 04:27 pm
1st Verse
People spit on you.....beat you down
People betrayed you.....Dissed you
People Caused you pain
And people made fun of you...they drove you insane
Chorus
The Pain...They Caused you led.....you
to your death.....death that you didnt want
but it was too late...cuz your gone and
your family....left to weep....your loss!!!
2nd Verse
Day After Day People Hurt you...Tore you
apart inside...your heart
They Destroyed your life....took away the peace
you once had
2nd Chorus
The Pain...They Caused you led.....you
to your death.....death that you didnt want
but it was too late...cuz your gone and
your family....left to weep....your loss!!!
Final Verse #3
Your Memories past through.....as you
Pulled....The trigger on ur sad life
ending your existence!!!!
From the life you HATED!!!!!!!!
Final Chorus
The Pain...They Caused you led.....you
to your death.....death that you didnt want
but it was too late...cuz your gone and
your family....left to weep....your loss!!!
That hurt them hard.....having to deal with your
Suicide from this world............. to another...which
brings them more grief of your loss!!!!!!!!
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bookbrain5
 
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Reply Sat 29 May, 2004 10:12 am
what spurred this? what caused this pain? what kind of music would this be set to? otherwise pretty good. the only thing i'd say is next time make it a little easier to read. the verse #s were a little close to everything.
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Tue 1 Jun, 2004 12:38 pm
It's very dark, as well as interesting.
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Gotenan
 
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Reply Wed 2 Jun, 2004 03:32 am
Very interesting indeed
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InFeCTeDMiKe16
 
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Reply Mon 21 Jun, 2004 01:34 pm
thnx for ur posts....well...i havent been to the board in a long time...but ill post some new songs soon...thnx all for ur posts
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