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Sat 24 Apr, 2004 11:49 pm
My first attempt at any sort of poetry:
The branches of the willow,
Spread out like a fountain,
Sway gently in the breeze.
I sit under it, and contemplate
The sky above, the grass below, so serene.
And I think of you.
You, who seem so flippant,
So detached and unconcerned,
You who make me turbulent inside.
Will I ever be able to break
Throught that wall of unconcern,
Which slogan is "What will be will be"?
My greatest fear is that i don't
And in that case you won't
Ever realize that i ever cared for you.
It is very nice poem lack and i hope to read more of your poems .....
keep on writing .... LOVER....