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Childhood memories

 
 
Reply Thu 22 Apr, 2004 04:39 pm
I remember bael
dark as night
eyes red as fire
forever protecting

I remember a box of rocks
heavy
cold
and void of love

i remember my cat fang
gray as the clouds
eyes like lamps
gone forever

i remember expedititions
unknown places
mysterious people
untamed lands

i remember my grandmother
immortal
infinently loving
fondly remembered
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gurlchix
 
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Reply Thu 22 Apr, 2004 05:16 pm
Beautiful words
Beautiful in a somber sort of way, but still beautiful...gurl chix
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 23 Apr, 2004 08:07 am
Dark Lord, I love it! As a matter of fact, I just experienced a few chill bumps. The best part of your poem is the paradox of the fourth stanza.
Bravo!
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