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I Incorporates Jazz Into It's Scratching

 
 
Reply Tue 20 Apr, 2004 03:40 pm
Hi, this is my first post here. Im 14 and i have been writing lyrics for my band for about a year now, any comments, suggestions, critique appreciated. thanks Smile

I Incorporates Jazz in its Scratching

I figured it out.

Which means someone better hold me back
Or Darwin better watch his back

Nostradamus may have pocket-sized our end
But its infringing copyright again
Because I roped and smuggled spokesman
To adapt and endorse the smoking trend

Votalato and Deneeve
Invent new tricks to line my sleeve
And my identitys distortion
I learned is layered in proportion
To the amount of times
I can slip alcohol slogans into conversation
And business cards into your drinks

french maids and language barriers
distracted me I said, so I dosed the servings too strong
and the ingredient has been detected she said,
"Im restless too but Im not about to go and start a band over it"
She said,
"The sad reality is that you just can't get us drunk enough to tip,
drunk enough to move, waiter,
or even drunk enough to care"
She said,

Ive figured you out.
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