gentle

Sweet!

thank you for reading and commenting.

Where you lay is with fluffy softness some where near nirvana. I hope and Your summer. as you already know is here as long as you hold it in your heart.
Let Your heart always pour forth from the blood and soul of your heart.
For it guides us not...?

beautiful sweet pea......shy violets bloom

Sweetpea

Your poem is lovely as is.

However I am going to venture an opinion in a most friendly spirit:

IMO you would improve the poem by deleting the word 'shy'.

My reason: I think 'shy' makes it a little too sweet.

-jjorge