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distant memory - your thoughts on this song

 
 
Reply Sat 17 Apr, 2004 02:15 pm
Distant Memory

Verse 1:
I don't feel like being here
no place to go - nothing to see
no fear
I can't leave
there's nothing out there
can't escape what i feel

emotionless, insane
your great, but hard to understand
can you be here, for me
when i'm gone - don't look back at me

Chorus:
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
what you are to me
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
what we had will never be anymore
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
what is real is right in front of me
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
Just go, I hate you now that your gone

Verse 2:
what is good is right here
the only good thing gained from you anymore
the one that is great for me
I don't need you anymore
She's real in my life, now that your gone

Verse 3:
what to be, what to do
ask them - in your mind once again
take me away - to her world
she showed me the way
now that your gone

be close, be here
never leave
she's for me now
she lives her life
she lives in her own special world

inverted chorus:
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
your gone - i'm glad to be your
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
new girl, new world - i'm your
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
what's left - i hate you now that your gone

Verse 4:
shed a tear, live a fear
don't hide from me
was it good
tell me how you feel

she and i - are okay
it's fun to be in her world
future holds, mysteries
endless possibilities

what she does, what she sees
distant from me
like her lots
not today,
but be there for me
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sat 17 Apr, 2004 03:07 pm
Umm, I like this, most of it flowed pretty good, some of it didn't, but other wise very cool....good work!
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marsalienattak70
 
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Reply Sun 18 Apr, 2004 03:09 pm
anyone else got anything to say
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Sun 18 Apr, 2004 03:57 pm
Probably not, it seems people at a2k would rather not bother with commenting on poetry anymore.
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marsalienattak70
 
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Reply Mon 19 Apr, 2004 01:09 pm
it's a song
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InTraNsiTiOn
 
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Reply Mon 19 Apr, 2004 01:16 pm
Same ****, still applies!
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