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Sat 17 Apr, 2004 02:15 pm
Distant Memory
Verse 1:
I don't feel like being here
no place to go - nothing to see
no fear
I can't leave
there's nothing out there
can't escape what i feel
emotionless, insane
your great, but hard to understand
can you be here, for me
when i'm gone - don't look back at me
Chorus:
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
what you are to me
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
what we had will never be anymore
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
what is real is right in front of me
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
Just go, I hate you now that your gone
Verse 2:
what is good is right here
the only good thing gained from you anymore
the one that is great for me
I don't need you anymore
She's real in my life, now that your gone
Verse 3:
what to be, what to do
ask them - in your mind once again
take me away - to her world
she showed me the way
now that your gone
be close, be here
never leave
she's for me now
she lives her life
she lives in her own special world
inverted chorus:
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
your gone - i'm glad to be your
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
new girl, new world - i'm your
Distant Memory - Distant Memory
what's left - i hate you now that your gone
Verse 4:
shed a tear, live a fear
don't hide from me
was it good
tell me how you feel
she and i - are okay
it's fun to be in her world
future holds, mysteries
endless possibilities
what she does, what she sees
distant from me
like her lots
not today,
but be there for me
Umm, I like this, most of it flowed pretty good, some of it didn't, but other wise very cool....good work!
anyone else got anything to say
Probably not, it seems people at a2k would rather not bother with commenting on poetry anymore.
Same ****, still applies!