grapie
 
Reply Sun 5 Jan, 2014 02:53 pm
Please let me know what you think about these lyrics I wrote! I want an honest reply Smile

"VOICES"

They whisper in my head
The voices
Destroying me from the inside out
The voices
Filling every thought with dread
The voices
I just can’t live with the doubt

I’ve fought them long enough
I’m ******* sick of it
You call me weak
Let’s see you handle the ****

I can’t fight them
The voices
I’ve tried for so long
The voices
They can’t be reasoned with
The voices
They are just too strong

You say it’s just a phase
You say I’m ******* fine
Yet you don’t know my demons
These thoughts are malign

They can’t be tamed
The voices
They can’t be confined
The voices
It’s a hopeless battle
The voices
Against my own mind

The voices
The voices
The voices
The voices
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AmirMaor
 
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Reply Thu 16 Jan, 2014 01:08 pm
@grapie,
Sound good to me Smile
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jane21august
 
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Reply Tue 20 Feb, 2018 11:44 pm
@grapie,
You say it’s just a phase
You say I’m ******* fine
Yet you don’t know my demons
These thoughts are malign

Amazing lines. Love it.
darkangel1720
 
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Reply Mon 5 Mar, 2018 09:49 am
@jane21august,
All the time that you rained on my parade.
All the clubs you got into using my name.
You think you broke my heart, oh bitch for goodness sake
YOu think I'm crying on my own well i ain't.

I didn't wanna write a song
Cuz I don't want everyone thinking I still cared I don't but
YOu still hit my phone up...

**** yourself ~ Halsey
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Amy Prisco
 
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Reply Fri 9 Mar, 2018 05:06 am
@grapie,
Love it!!
Sounds good
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