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Alone does not mean.............................

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Fri 16 Apr, 2004 05:33 pm
peopleless,
It merely means no face.
It doesn't mean an eremite,
Nor gone without a trace.

Alone means struggling to belong
To some small dot in time
That only to ourselves
Impose the swiftness of a rhyme

That fragments ere we write the word,
In disappearing ink.

and in between we close our minds
and just forget to think.
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Wilso
 
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Reply Sun 18 Apr, 2004 12:57 am
Wow.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 18 Apr, 2004 04:09 am
Wilso, I take it that you like the piece. Very Happy

Thanks, buddy.
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Wilso
 
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Reply Sun 18 Apr, 2004 05:28 am
Yep. It speaks to me.
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Raggedyaggie
 
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Reply Sun 18 Apr, 2004 09:29 am
And, it speaks to me also, Letty. Lovely and so true.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 18 Apr, 2004 09:41 am
Ah, Raggedy, my dear friend. I guess my meanderings came across the wide divide. Thank you, youngun!
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