Society's mistake

Reply Fri 15 Nov, 2013 06:11 pm
from the glimpse of your palm
led me into mistakes that now i regret
as you taught me words like yolo and stay calm
as i shall be but will never forget

the bad habits that you taught me were ok
simply after that on them you judged me
like what can i say
fat,ugly,sad,fugly so and so you grudged me

But now i am breaking free with no excuse me
like please and thank you words lost give me a break
because after you tormented and bruised me
you can call me society's mistake

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Reply Fri 20 Dec, 2013 09:22 am
@lil host,
Is this how you feel now? And/or have throughout your life. Or is it you understand the feelings of one who feels, and/or has felt this way?
lil host
Reply Sat 21 Dec, 2013 09:42 am
its my understandings of how one feels nor my feeling too
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