can anyone rate this rap??

Reply Sat 31 Aug, 2013 06:32 am
my wishlists on my hitlist,let me pick a 10
been cryin fo b,b sickness,soul burned to ashes,turned livid

ive lived in arsenal,death is on my head,the lifes ma witness
but m not gonna beg for my breaths,m most bizarre,head of same

guttersucker grew up big as mothafucka in this buisness
ever since i was a suckler,loved to gain hate but lovers grudgin it

started to **** the world soon after judgin it
so u better watch whom you fuckin wit,poverty made me lonely n cold

my vision than made me rich,my thinking was my only gold,yes karma is a filthy bitch
now tell me why do i get females affection

where are those who envied me,m that same hated reflection,as insane as mentioned by my enemies

you wanna face me,my pace faster,the time changed bastardss
my skills mastered,i can get close to ya,mavin backwards

and nah now dont love 8,now ive learned how to bluff hate
knok me down wit your knuckles,ive won this hustle race

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Reply Sat 31 Aug, 2013 08:32 am
The flow wasn't that good so maybe a six or seven out of ten
Reply Sat 31 Aug, 2013 09:16 am
man one of my friend said the same thing but u see the one who writes,makes and knows its flow,thats the reason some people say this for some of my lyrics,i wish i could buy the mic too to record my rap,unfortunately i cantt afford,....how ever thanx fo feedback
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