My Poems

I don't know if we are supposed to post our own poems in hear but I am, tell me your honest opinion.

The end of war is near
we will no longer live in fear
The guns are all silent now
The tanks lie and rust
the living have came home
while the dead returned to dust
No sounds to retreat
No gun fire in the streets
"Peace" god said in a powerful voice
When this comes we will all rejoice

I wrote this poem when I was thinking about vitam and all the people in this war.



I like this poem it is a metaphor for someome


I see this lonely Rose,
It's right before my eyes.
I see this sad Rose,
And I know that it cries.
I see this dying Rose,
And I just want to give it love.
I see this neglected Rose,
So I begin to care for it.
And so now..
I see this loved Rose,
And it's no longer crying
I see this living Rose,
And it's no longer dying.
I see this beautiful Rose,
And I'll always care for and love it



this poem is about mostly religon


My feelings, here, are well expressed.
My issues, faced, and well addressed.
And here is my goal here is my quest
That in the end God i do my best
Bless my efforts in my writing
and help the world to continue uniting
In all the sins i've committed
I hope i've admitted
I promise you lord My lifelong decation
to honor and respect all of your creation



All these poems I have written myself, plz tell my your honest opinion and get detailed.