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bookbrain5
 
Reply Wed 24 Mar, 2004 07:39 pm
I close my eyes and feel it hit.
I think to myself, "Please God, Please..."
I open my eyes and talk to him.
I know he cares, I know he's there.
The thought of i hurts me more,
Yet every day it hurts less and less.
When will it leave me?
When will it end?
Crying or Very sad
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theollady
 
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Reply Sat 27 Mar, 2004 05:54 pm
Mockery, perhaps?
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bookbrain5
 
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Reply Fri 2 Apr, 2004 04:22 pm
but mocking what...
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theollady
 
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Reply Sun 4 Apr, 2004 01:41 pm
perceived to be-- helplessness.
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bookbrain5
 
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Reply Mon 5 Apr, 2004 08:42 am
Can that be cured?
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theollady
 
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Reply Tue 6 Apr, 2004 04:09 pm
Yes,

I believe.
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bookbrain5
 
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Reply Tue 6 Apr, 2004 04:39 pm
How?
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theollady
 
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Reply Tue 6 Apr, 2004 08:39 pm
Faith in God.
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MisterEThoughts
 
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Reply Tue 13 Apr, 2004 12:49 pm
Amen, and this is really good in a short form...
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