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Reply Wed 17 Mar, 2004 06:57 pm
Restlessness leads to mind wandering,
Mind wandering leads to thought,
Thoughts lead to words,
Words lead to actions,
Actions can lead to anything…








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farmerman
 
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Reply Wed 17 Mar, 2004 07:20 pm
I give you words.
Im too tired for any action
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unluckystar
 
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Reply Sat 20 Mar, 2004 07:00 pm
hmmm...IMO, its an okay poem...not that exiting tho.
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bookbrain5
 
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Reply Tue 6 Apr, 2004 09:07 am
ne sugguestions to make it better?
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