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Reply Sat 5 Jan, 2013 12:25 pm
aging steady
the long time home
breaking no bow of hope
settled is the wind
of mind

eternity
expecting
responses
of the young
finding the old

no more
contemplation
exceeds request
the bow hidden
behind blinds of

destiny





















-A snake bites itself blindly as a lizard ponders the light refracting from his warming rock. 'Selfish!' Had said God!.
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Reply Sun 6 Jan, 2013 02:56 am
@DavJohanis,
Very powerful and I like thw word play. You right good poetry.
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Reply Sun 6 Jan, 2013 02:59 am
@JTG198904,
Cool, thanks man.
Keep your best on your own PC and study it, is my advice.
JTG198904
 
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Reply Mon 7 Jan, 2013 04:23 am
@DavJohanis,
Thank you, we're a new generation, and we have to keep poetic language alive.
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