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Fired from the hip.

 
 
Reply Thu 3 Jan, 2013 09:31 am
A skater lounged.. In hope of flight
No one saw his eternal night
Moonbeams danced in his park
Attitude flaming so damn stark

Free falling those few feet
flicks it out, keeps it neat.
velocity peaking at the curve
grabs it tight, got that nerve

takes big air falling hot
grabbing will.. a human shot
dust on the ground no slip unkempt
slightest flaw corrected. every attempt

Wheels on fire no fear tonight
another day.. another girl

..speeds his soul to the light
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Reply Fri 4 Jan, 2013 04:21 am
I love this, a very modern topic. Very Happy
DavJohanis
 
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Reply Fri 4 Jan, 2013 04:22 am
@JTG198904,
Thank you very much, very nice of you to say!
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