can anyone rate my rap out of 10?

Reply Mon 24 Dec, 2012 01:40 pm
this rap is written by a brown colored person,Asian man
nobody signs him because he is not an American,he is sick of it n in this song he is dissing racists...

this is my time to envade,n if this time u evade i'ma burn this whole nation on fire,ain't gonna be no way to escape so be care full n make no mistakes cuz when u take ma name your soul should b on stake
em's relapse elapsed,now its ma time to payback
u multi-heads racists i'ma slap another relapse on your head n slice u into half
probably a box of cond** is enough to f*** your ass hole crapped
cuz u like to get a f**k from the back
but i ain't finished with that,cuz u know i unleash pain with mac's
which bust cap's in ass of cynics,n racist who tried to vanish ma rap
perhapse critics nagged me on racists behalf so i'ma do a mishap
i'ma keep slicing your back untill i don't have ma revenge n sit back
to make new rap-tracks,but in mean time
its diss track for sinuses trying to be menaces with broken back
u grims grilled me when i was kink in rap
i grind ma teeth's till i wasn't kin nor kith of rap
n u avoided me cuz i wasn't negroid
nor blonde but because i was from pak not from l.a or Detroit
u cursed me cuz m half-white
but now ma heart is brick n negroid so i can fight n homicide
u ain't elegant mutherf*****s y u so arrogant?
u cant even motivate any hip hop legend
alive,6 caps busted in pac's ass n he died
now u call him mc when he cant rhyme?
hate eminem cuz he is alive,he ll be better than pac when he ll pass by
it got me thinkin that u r made to abhor,n hate is supposedly ur mentor,than m blazing factor n if u r actor than i,ma director of that sector n m master of rap ****
so don't ever try to abolish it
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Reply Mon 24 Dec, 2012 03:50 pm
can anyone rate my rap out of 10?

well sure

but why hurt your feelings unnecessarily Razz
Reply Wed 26 Dec, 2012 04:08 pm
well i like hurting peoples feelings

out of 10
i give this a BIG ZEROOOO

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Reply Sat 29 Dec, 2012 10:39 am
Eh, it's a 6. That wasnt very good
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