Fred
 
Reply Thu 11 Mar, 2004 09:18 am
I have been dying since the day you left me. Each day being a piece of my heart getting lost in this world....And still to this day I still have not found those pieces..The hole that you left in me hurts so bad that still I can feel it burn when the wind blows through it...I miss you like the rose misses the sun in the winter time...If I had only known you were there all this time you might still be here..But hope is what lies beneath this skin of mine it lies so deep that its tattooed on my heart. Sometimes in life you need to follow your heart even if its where you know it shouldn't be..So as I let these feelings go, Now I can waste my worries and always be sure that I wont be alone anymore..Cause love it the greatest gift of all
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Reply Thu 11 Mar, 2004 12:12 pm
No it's not. Love is nice and all but there are way more important things in this world. Give it a look!
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