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Where You Shouldn't be.....................

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sat 6 Mar, 2004 05:57 pm
Is on that cul de sac,
The Mews of dead end things
That often lack the feel of real.

But should you choose to face
The wall of never,
I Will examine every bend
Of clever that
Includes your friend of long ago,
Even so,

I wish you what you want to be,
Still me, Letti
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sozobe
 
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Reply Sat 6 Mar, 2004 07:09 pm
"I will examine every bend/ Of clever" -- nice.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 7 Mar, 2004 06:35 am
Thanks, Soz. I had forgotten that I wrote this. UhOh. <smile>
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 7 Mar, 2004 10:11 am
A pleasant surprise, letty. But, then, you are always surprising me. I like this one very much.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 7 Mar, 2004 10:14 am
Edgar, I really thought that my creativity was on holiday. This was just an awakening. Thanks, my friend.
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the dark lord
 
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Reply Fri 23 Apr, 2004 02:50 pm
that is nice letty and thanks again for pointing me in the right direction to work on my writings.
the dark lord
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Letty
 
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Reply Fri 23 Apr, 2004 02:58 pm
Dark Lord, As Frost pointed out, poetry is the one medium in which one may say one thing, but mean another.

I taught Creativity Writing in the public school system for many years, and that's about all that I miss of teaching.
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