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Behind The Scenes.

 
 
Andrew
 
Reply Thu 12 Dec, 2002 10:46 pm
Stop looking under the light
Watch the person in the back,
Observe the bag that's being filled, not what they pack,
At the end of each verse sung, she'll take in her breath,
Pay attention at this time, for once ignore the rest.

Behind the fist throwing the punch, is an angry mind,
Instead of jumping the gun, find out why he's unkind,
The waves you like to surf on, don't keep themselves alive,
May this thought run through your mind next time you take a dive.

All birds that fly through the sky rely on air,
This force although is never seen, of it we're aware,
Look past the tree, into the space between it's leaves,
Given time, you'll percieve far subtler energies,
Don't just focus on the scenes, but what lies behind them too,
Because the scenes wouldn't exist, without the backup crew.


by Andrew Murray
from "Self Expression"
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Craven de Kere
 
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Reply Thu 12 Dec, 2002 10:50 pm
Please confirm that this is original poetry (I think it's yours, am I right?), if so one of the moderators will move it to the original writing forum.

And WELCOME to Able2Know!
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Andrew
 
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Reply Thu 12 Dec, 2002 11:16 pm
Yes It's Mine
Yes, "Behind The Scenes" is my original poem.

Andrew
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dupre
 
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Reply Fri 13 Dec, 2002 03:22 am
Wow. What a way to shake up perspective. I like this original take on things. Me, I'm not very perceptive in general, not even "under the light." Must try harder. Reminds me of a part of a poem I never wrote:

Next time you hold a toad
To get a better view,
Pretend to be the toad
Looking back at you.

Looking forward to more postings from you, Andrew.
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jjorge
 
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Reply Wed 18 Dec, 2002 05:48 pm
Very, very nice Andrew. I like your thinking.

PS welcome to A2K.
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