Reply Sat 3 Nov, 2012 10:47 am
Written at 7am this morning and inspired by a dream:


Oh, there you are!
(not where you're supposed to be -in other hands)
but somehow loose and running free,
and you elude all those who seek to grasp you,
friends, sinister ones, (thus far) -and me;

Can you be you happy in that place?
...or is the landscape -filled with danger as it is-
a fearful jungle you survive in?

Your memory, entombed I thought,
was dust or mummified,
but now you're here, in front of me,
and fear, and love re-ignited, impel me,
and I would have you back.

I would recapture you.
-jjorge (11-3-12)
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Reply Sat 3 Nov, 2012 12:18 pm
One of your better efforts. I likes it very mucho.
Reply Sat 3 Nov, 2012 01:07 pm
Thanks Edgar. All the best to you. Hope you are well!
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Reply Sat 3 Nov, 2012 01:09 pm
I am fine as it is possible to get, jjorge. I hope all is well in your camp?
Reply Sat 3 Nov, 2012 09:14 pm
All is well Edgar. I'm staying real busy substitute teaching and I'm pretty healthy (thus far) for an old dude of seventy! :-)
Reply Sat 3 Nov, 2012 09:19 pm
I turned 70 in September. It ain't so bad. Razz
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