DFC100-share your lyrics

this is where you share lyrics, people tell you what they think, and what to work on...i'll start it up

red rose intill i paint it black
all the sodium when i fall into cardiac
arrest from a heart attack
limp forward with a broken back
knife to the arm felt like a deep slash
i walked away with a broken neck from a car crash
no angel just a dark apparition
i'm the darkness in the devil's vision
so into rap that my eye starts twitchin
i was in the devil's mind so i guess i was chosen
my body is on fire but my soul is frozen
i show people what it's like,.... but they say it's hard to see
they put a hole in my chest where my heart should be
i'm not tall and not the strongest
but i'm able to tough it out the longest
if i fail i'm back in my old life and i know this
no more playin around it's time for me to focus
i feel like the world is a tower
of a raining concrete shower
i say i'm the king.. yet i have no power
being the best, i guess, i could keep wishin
time for you all to just shut up and listen
cause with my lyrics you got no idea what your missin.

i'm controlling the brain
kill yourself, i'm killin your name
lighting you up with an arsenic flame
your bowing to me like you were my dame
disrespect me... i'm sending shots through your window pane
mixing your coffee with a dangerous bane
step in your house with matches and propane
this is what happens when you go insane
you wake up tomorrow like nothing happened.... like everything stayed the same
people saw you at the scene,,, and the cops try to explain
you lost control so there's no memory of this that you can regain
i only know that i brunt your ashes...every single grain
i remember this because the burns on my hand...they still remain

lyrics that paralyze your body will leave you with nothing intact
crazy enough to rob an old lady and break her ******* back
throwin fire watch the sparks - fly dude
reverse star wars welcome to the dark - side luke
you all can move ahead i'll stay behind the unanimity line
don't go to far you'll trip over the proximity mine