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Thu 19 Feb, 2004 01:42 am
All this time...2 years
I felt so strongly...I feel so strongly
I wanted us...I longed for us
I believed someday it would happen
We were so far apart...miles away
I couldn't give love to anyone
like I felt I could for you
but still I had relationships
I let someone love me
Like I love you
and I was breaking them
because you were all i could think of
And after all this time...2 years
we finally talked...I can move on
It's never gonna happen
I've come to a realization
And now I can give all my love to the man that truly loves me
I will no longer hold onto you
It's hard to forget...but clayton
I'm still glad we're friends
I hope you find someone someday
and not be so bitter
You don't have to be alone
You're a great guy, not worthless like you said.
I wish you happiness and all the best.
Good-bye
Out of sadness, wisdom, stand up for pessimism. Well written and evocative of our uncertainties in matters of the heart. You might want to remember that "your" is a possessive pronoun, and that the word you meant was you're,
Ohh right, thanks Letty I'm always messin up the "your and you're". Good thing they're people like you around to help get me outta the habit. Thanks for reading this.
Just so that you will know, my friend. The essence of your poem was the most important, and it contained no flaws.