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Good-bye to you, that part of my life

 
 
Reply Thu 19 Feb, 2004 01:42 am
All this time...2 years
I felt so strongly...I feel so strongly
I wanted us...I longed for us
I believed someday it would happen
We were so far apart...miles away
I couldn't give love to anyone
like I felt I could for you
but still I had relationships
I let someone love me
Like I love you
and I was breaking them
because you were all i could think of
And after all this time...2 years
we finally talked...I can move on
It's never gonna happen
I've come to a realization
And now I can give all my love to the man that truly loves me
I will no longer hold onto you
It's hard to forget...but clayton
I'm still glad we're friends
I hope you find someone someday
and not be so bitter
You don't have to be alone
You're a great guy, not worthless like you said.
I wish you happiness and all the best.
Good-bye
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Reply Thu 19 Feb, 2004 01:21 pm
Out of sadness, wisdom, stand up for pessimism. Well written and evocative of our uncertainties in matters of the heart. You might want to remember that "your" is a possessive pronoun, and that the word you meant was you're,
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Reply Thu 19 Feb, 2004 01:41 pm
Ohh right, thanks Letty I'm always messin up the "your and you're". Good thing they're people like you around to help get me outta the habit. Thanks for reading this.
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Letty
 
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Reply Thu 19 Feb, 2004 01:54 pm
Just so that you will know, my friend. The essence of your poem was the most important, and it contained no flaws.
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