floris
 
Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 05:34 am
His church in your soul,
Your prayer on his lips.
Together:
two hands and one breath.
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 12:17 pm
Hi, floris. Welcome to A2K.

The compression in this poem says multitudes.
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drom et reve
 
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Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 12:45 pm
Deftly said, Floris; I much liked it.

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Individual
 
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Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 06:18 pm
Ahh, short and sweet
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floris
 
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Reply Wed 18 Feb, 2004 03:21 am
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Thank you all for your words and you're right, Letty. This poem is a gift for a cuple that I know. Their love inspired me.
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