freestyle rapping

i ain't goin let my thoughts win
i'm never given in
i'm about to blow my thoughts....... up into oblivion
i can't let them control me
i can't let them hold me
back..... so i can't hold this rap game closely
but people say give up because i guess they think they know me
you would think rap is some kind of special ability
not when i have demons in my head that are slowly killing me
just letting you all know that the devil designed me
you better not say i'm good...... then laugh behind me
because i get nuts and just let my thoughts blind me
people won't help you when it's your last chance to blow
people just go
it's sickening for them to watch and they just leave your show
people always say i'm good.... tell me something i don't know
this world is rough
everyone who judges always has to be tough
when they say i'm good my mind says but not good enough
telling me that its worthless
sayin i can't rap to no one in till its perfect

this is a track
dfc100[ good time]

verse:
after my parents divorce.... damn how could this happen to me
my father walking out the door is what i happen to see
my mom with tears in her eyes said its the way it had to be
but i knew after this i can't live life happily
i'll rap about my life in till you all feel me
do i walk up to god and ask him to please heal me
you probably think i should rap about the good things that i've seen
but i rap about what i live and not what i dream

chorus:
i never complained about my life i just say it's fine
cause i'm sure people don't have a family like mine
everything works out... nothing could damage god's design
i'm proud to say that today.... dad i had a good time
whats life when your depressed
stop saying your life is a curse stand and say that your blessed

verse:
but i'm blessed with a caring family so i guess i won
when i'm older my father's name is the name of my son
me against the world in this race i'm the second to run
this demon decided to leave
now i can breath
but i won't appear to you in till you believe
i was always sad in till i saw my dads Cadillac
but after he left i always said i wanted my daddy back
but now he's here and i'm complete my life is done
cause i'm proud to say that today i had fun


chorus:
i never complained about life i just say its fine
cause i'm sure people don't have a family like mine
everything works out... nothing could damage gods design
i'm to say that today.... dad i really had a good time
what's life when your depressed
stop saying your life is a curse stand up and say that your blessed

I like this one

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