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The Shadow of the gnomon...................

 
 
Letty
 
Reply Sun 15 Feb, 2004 07:10 pm
starkly moves to measure,
The pendulum of grief and pleasure.
And now it only stands as one adornment,
To satisfy the lawn of supple memories, forlorn
Ment..............
The looming shade of the Norman castle,
The hut of simple people and their torment..
And their ancient pleasures...
Empty treasures.
Punctuated with shields
Of easy penetration,
Defining a nation.
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dyslexia
 
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Reply Sun 15 Feb, 2004 07:19 pm
I think I'll walk until the sun
Brings us another day
Men quarrel with everyone
They grow old and refuse to play
But how black the fields in the early light
The seed is on its way.
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 15 Feb, 2004 08:11 pm
and gleaning in the fields,
We find a potion,
That simply takes us back
To love and notion of
Picking up the lumps
On railroad tracks,
Ignoring all the charts
And all the facts.
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edgarblythe
 
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Reply Sun 15 Feb, 2004 08:40 pm
in the simple light of day
who work and play
til the darkened hue
hail the sinking blue
home warm and safe
to plan and love and dream
to measure another day
to gage the planet and heartstrings
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Letty
 
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Reply Sun 15 Feb, 2004 08:56 pm
Amulets and dreamcatchers,
succubi, and body snatchers,
Beating softly, vibrant drums,
Silent rivers,
Morning comes,
Wanting love and everafters,
Pigeons coo among the rafters.

Hand hewn logs,
And slivers gleam
Among the now,
And in between?

The white raven
Shedding feathers,
Soft satin,
Crackling leathers...
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colorbook
 
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Reply Sun 15 Feb, 2004 09:52 pm
Measurements silent right after sundown
as the moonlight covets it to give it a crown
it rages like the wind pushing hard at your back
and it continually refuses to ever turn back
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theollady
 
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Reply Sun 15 Feb, 2004 09:52 pm
Hence the long day, as we know it
Ends, and comes. With much renewed wit!
Candles, horses, limos, jeep...
(and many things that only creep).
A downy bed, but gravelled trail;
"Oh grandest play" where souls travail!
"Yea, must I laugh and be in pleasure?"
Contentment be our long kept treasure.
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 10:16 am
Hey, everyone.

Isn't it amazing how one verse begats another? I have enjoyed reading every poem here; so different, and yet so communal.
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theollady
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 01:54 pm
Remarkably inspired by the TEACHER, herself.
Letty, you set a gifted pace.

(I enjoyed it all, too- thrilled at the talent of dyslexia.)
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 01:59 pm
and I, theo, as well as yours and the rest. Sometimes, things just need saying and the only tongue we have is verse.
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Diane
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 02:04 pm
Beautiful, thank you all.
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 02:08 pm
Well, there be the princess. Hey, gal. Your turn.
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dyslexia
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 02:23 pm
le sang que ce soit d'un sundial au midi sur le visage ou à la peau des morts dans noir et du blanc comme nouvelles ou vidéo à 11 ressemble toujours aux ombres
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 02:32 pm
and the translation
Lies in the beauty of the variation,
And the expectation of pronunciation.
Soft sounds and pleasing to the ear,
Mon petite, enfant.
Allon, allon.

Hey, did I spell all the Frenchie stuff correctly? Smile
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dyslexia
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 02:37 pm
translation
blood be it from a sundial at noon
on the face or skin of the dead
in black and white as news
or video at 11
always looks like shadows
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 03:16 pm
Dys, that was intriguing. I didn't know you spoke French.
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Letty
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 06:14 pm
Ever look and seen a snowflake
Resting on the tongue of time?
Ever feel the cold of warming,
On the rime of hoary line?
I have stood within the shadow,
and have bathed within the sun,
Taken quietly in the moonbeam,
Waterfalls of sweet decline.
And the cave that stands behind it,
Whispers softly to me still,
Say my name, you nymphs of water,
It's all we have that's left of will.
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colorbook
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 06:49 pm
I took this from my spontaneous poems, because it fits here.

The lonely snowflake fell
searching...looking around
finding a roof top to stick to
and then another, his brother,
until his whole family covered the ground
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theollady
 
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Reply Mon 16 Feb, 2004 10:06 pm
Great lines on snow, colorbook and Letty.

Forecasters promise us snow... it does not come.
Tonight, they still promise...
I am going to bed, refuse to wait and see. Very Happy


snow Crying or Very sad Crying or Very sad
(too far south)
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Letty
 
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Reply Tue 17 Feb, 2004 12:55 pm
Turning snow into ice cream,
Ginger snaps and lemonade,
Ballet on ice,
Don't you feel " the nice?"


NO!
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