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Tue 10 Dec, 2002 03:24 am
Absent Lover
bed & I
both unmade
Winter
you touch
my bluish/cold hand
and walk away
not knowing
between my thighs
is humid/hot summer
Thanks, sweetpea!
I like the first one best.
Much more elegant than saying, "Me so horny". :wink:
Awwww jjorge! Where's your romance?! :wink:
Much more elegant than saying, "Me so horny". :wink:
oops! how did I post two times????
Rae
I DO like them both!
I was simply noting that they are...er...a little steamy.
Uh huh.
Sorry, but those few words hold deep meaning for me. I like it.
You're forgiven, jjorge!
Steamy can be a good thing..... :wink:
Rae wrote:Uh huh.
Sorry, but those few words hold deep meaning for me. I like it.
Rae
Sweetpea sad a LOT, and said it elegantly, and with only a few words in both poems. That's very good writing. I like it too.
PS I concur, steamy is good.
rae & jjorge....
thank you both for reading and commenting....have been in mexico, so am late in my thank you's......
and, personally, i like steamy myself.......good for the pores...heeee heee!
Quite right, sweetpea!
Waiting, patiently, for more poetry.....hint, hint, nudge, nudge, wink, wink..... :wink:
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